Jamie Diggory

[Jamie Diggory]

Name:Jamie Diggory
Nicknames:Tyrone, Tye.
Age:16
Blood:Halfblood
Birthday:Nov 10
Preferred House:Hufflepuff
Time Period(Marauder's/Trio's): Trio
Any ability or special blood type you have aka vampire, veela, werewolf, etc.:None
Personality (At least 1 paragraph):Jamie is funloving likes a good laugh if he gets bored he might find someway to entertain himself by using spells on animals.
Personal History (2 paragraphs): Jamie's Family were murdered by You Know Who. His Favorite Spell Seserectum Was Learned from his Brother Thats why its his favorite spell. Jamie was named after his Other Brother.
He does not wish to be reminded if so be careful you know loads of counter Jinxes Cos he knows almost all spells and will Use Them if he gets annoyed and/or bored.

Appearance (1 paragraph and/or picture):

Hobbie(s):Quiditch (Keeper) with his Friend tom.

Likes:Friends

Dislikes:Slytherin Gits

What other RPGs have you been one? Please post in the following format:http://awart.proboards51.com/index.cgi?
Host - Name of RPG
AKA: Proboards - Warped Wanderings
Role play Sample(2 good formed paragraphs please!):Jamie was At the lake him and his friends where taking turns to jump in.when it was Jamie's turn he swallowed some gillyweed then jumped in. he stayed under water for a while trying to scare his friends. He then swam to the other edge of the lake and got out "Flagrate" Jamie made some fire around him to warm him off.

Then went up to the Astronomy
and saw his friends diving in to the lake and heard them shouting "Jamie!" "hehehehehe" Jamie said silently to himself then went to his friends and told them all about it all of them laughed.

[James Potter]

I'm not an admin, so feel free to hit me in the head with a herring for daring to comment, but I think The Allmighty Admin might want a bit more - Personality needs to be at least a paragraph, and personal history at least 2. I'd also point out that in appearance and name (not personality, true) he's painfully close to Cedric and although we don't have him at the moment (seeing as how he's dead and all) that might be pushing it a little.

Couple of hints - personality talk about his strengths and weaknesses, how he'd react in different situations, what sort of people he gets on with, what his ambitions and fears are.. that sort of thing.

Personal history should go into some detail about his childhood - how old was he when they were murdered, and why were they murdered? Did he grow up wizarding or muggle? How well did he get on with his brother and why did he teach him curses? Then go on to Hogwarts - feelings on getting the letter, favourite subjects, reputation built up, who he made friends with... that sort of thing.

You have a good basis here, no doubt, but maybe you should build on it a bit. My profile is by no means exemplar - check out Sirius, Amy and Rayne, for example.

Oh.. and you're missing something at the end. Re-read the rules and it should leap out.

[Jamie Diggory]

Really it is 2 paragraph's

[James Potter]

Erm.. I suppose technically yes, but I think Sirius/Harry wants meaty paragraphs rather than single sentances

[Sirius Black]

Righto James meh friend, but you've forgot one minor detail.

A paragraph is five to seven sentences and I'd really like to see that. You're new to the site so I'll cut you some slack for the first few times you post with this character.

By the way, you've only just touched base with this character and it seems he's just.. how do I put this.. another face in the crowd of the same type of people. Where are his faults? His weaknesses? His strengths? His abilities (can be academic or other wise) What's his family like? His past? What makes him unique from every other person?

Surely his friends cannot be his only likes.. what about food, favorite animal, hobbies, interests.. that sort of thing.

On his appearance, you've given me what he looks like and that's ok, but what type of clothes is he in if he does not wear the uniform? Is he a rocker, prep (no offense to any of those out there), western dresser, etc? What clothes does he like to wear? Shoes? Eye wear?

Just invision the character as a person. Also, lengthening your posts.. there's a thread under the Rules board that you might find useful.